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Days are nights...

threecrookedhearts6threecrookedhearts6 Posts: 82
edited September 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
While these grey skies fade to blue,
A yellow light falls through.
Blue, green and yellow hold
Such simple, underrated beauty.
As hours pass, this fine night
Makes the summer sun look a black hole.
The moonlight intoxicates,
Lifts me up above it in hopes to heal.
A full moon between my body and soul,
The sun's kindness reflects on me.
“I don't know what this means. I don't think it means anything.”
-Eddie Vedder
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  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    that was really pretty, this one made me imagine that I was there, good read :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    I like this one. :)
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  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    lovely image
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • threecrookedhearts6threecrookedhearts6 Posts: 82
    thanks for reading my poem...its the first one ive ever posted and it felt really good...this board is so theraputic, no? =)
    “I don't know what this means. I don't think it means anything.”
    -Eddie Vedder
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    nice 1st poem, keep it coming!

    yes, reading and writing poetry

    is therapeutic, it's healing

    as it's done, with feeling
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    And of course it feels good to hear other people appreciate what you do.
    ?Therapy, it defintitely is, t least to me it is.

    So I'd also like to thank everyone here for being eachothers' shrinks :p
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • afanafan Posts: 59
    Very nice.
  • threecrookedhearts6threecrookedhearts6 Posts: 82
    Jamal wrote:
    So I'd also like to thank everyone here for being eachothers' shrinks :p

    A-ment to that!
    “I don't know what this means. I don't think it means anything.”
    -Eddie Vedder
  • Pearl_Jam_NecklacePearl_Jam_Necklace Posts: 501
    threecrookedhearts6 wrote:
    While these grey skies fade to blue,
    A yellow light falls through.
    Blue, green and yellow hold
    Such simple, underrated beauty.
    As hours pass, this fine night
    Makes the summer sun look a black hole.
    The moonlight intoxicates,
    Lifts me up above it in hopes to heal.
    A full moon between my body and soul,
    The sun's kindness reflects on me.



    wow ..... BEAUTIFUL......look forward to reading more of your poems
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    Pearl_Jam_Necklace wrote:
    wow ..... BEAUTIFUL......look forward to reading more of your poems
    ²nd
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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