Some writing

Jkingy
Jkingy Posts: 46
edited June 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Hey, haven't posted here before, I've tried to start writing a bit recently, just wondering what people thought of this, it's not really a poem or anything, just a scrawl.

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And there may be some one-sided reunion
as I imagine bottles and benches
and changed faces
while I try to remember the air around your head

Then I add the two
live there in the spare minutes of the day
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Thanks for looking.
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  • ForestBrain
    ForestBrain Posts: 460
    man, that's sad. Good, but sad. One-sided reunion...great! I love it.
    When life gives you lemons, throw them at somebody.
  • pacifier
    pacifier Posts: 1,009
    I really enjoyed it you should fill it out and keep writing. good luck with it
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    yea its showing ability.
    writing can be fulfilling.
    keep @ it.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce

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