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I will carry you

clifford_1972clifford_1972 Posts: 113
edited April 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Tears in my eyes,
Tears that rolls down my face.
Pain in my heart,
Pain that radients through me.
These tears are not for me,
This pain is not my own.
The pain I feel is for you,
These tears are for you.

I can feel your hurt,
I can feel your pain.
I know the problems are
Eating you up inside,
Wanting you to run away.
I know it's breaking you down
Making you fall to the ground.

I so want to hold you,
I so want to kiss the tears away.
I so want to bare your load,
Take it off your shoulders
To ease your pain.

But I can't baby,
But I will do the next best.
I will walk beside you,
Support you and hold you up
When you get weak.
I will cry with you and pray
I will share your load and carry
It with you always and forever.
"When a man lies,He murders some part of the world
These are the pale deaths which men miscall their lives,All this I cannot bear to witness any longer,
Cannot the kingdom of salvation,Take me home!"
Cliff Burton R.I.PFebruary 10, 1962 – September 27, 1986
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  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    That's very sweet. and reminds me of that footprints poem about jesus carrying someone when they didn't have the strength to carry on. It's nice to be reminded that we can do that too.
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    This is so sweet.
  • Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
    clifford_1972 wrote:
    Tears in my eyes,
    Tears that rolls down my face.
    Pain in my heart,
    Pain that radients through me.
    These tears are not for me,
    This pain is not my own.
    The pain I feel is for you,
    These tears are for you.

    I can feel your hurt,
    I can feel your pain.
    I know the problems are
    Eating you up inside,
    Wanting you to run away.
    I know it's breaking you down
    Making you fall to the ground.

    I so want to hold you,
    I so want to kiss the tears away.
    I so want to bare your load,
    Take it off your shoulders
    To ease your pain.

    But I can't baby,
    But I will do the next best.
    I will walk beside you,
    Support you and hold you up
    When you get weak.
    I will cry with you and pray
    I will share your load and carry
    It with you always and forever.

    The amount of passion & dedication you display is so intense I feel as if I'm imploding!!! Wow!! I assure you she loves you with a fire that could light the night's sky. A man like you can surely sweep a grrl off her feet over & over again!! The honeymoon still hasn't ended!!
    Truly touching,...
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
  • memememe Posts: 4,695
    Thank you.

    I know someone feels that way about me.
    We are truly grateful :)
    ... and the will to show I will always be better than before.
  • Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
    meme wrote:
    Thank you.

    I know someone feels that way about me.
    We are truly grateful :)


    Me, too ;) Aren't we the fortunate ones? Maybe Karma is done playing Slinky with me :D
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
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