Heaven

Mystique420

I look deep in your eyes

I see there what I feel inside

We share something between us,

Neither one of us can hide.


I feel your lips touch mine,

I loose all my control,

All it took was a look and a kiss,

To Know you were a part of my soul.


I see your hands on my skin,

I want and need you to do more,

The passionate look you give me,

Tells me heaven is in store.


I feel your hand against my thigh,

I know you will fulfill every wish,

We were made to fit together,

And all it took was a look and a kiss.

I look deep in your eyes

And I see heaven there inside,

You make me feel so beautiful,

What I feel for you I cannot hide.

pacifier

This seems very sexual, I nearly had to look away inside my head incase I saw too much of the pretend you with the pretend him, but it also seems full of love, so instead of seaming sleazy it seems like something that many people hope for and not all are lucky enough to have.

BasketCase

Keep on writing - I wish I could use that for a song - it's great!!!

I'll share something with you -

Behind the dust & bones,
Is a place I know you go.
Thoughts like outterspace,
Your mind endlessly roams.
Searching for signs of -
What once we could have known,
Hopeing with anger this pain -
Controls both of our souls.
That's the place I never go...

Mystique420

glad u like,... if u are serious about using it as a song u can pm me as i write for many artists,... well, i write for myself first, and create my own music, but i'd hel ya out if u were serious with pure intentions,..