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Hide & Seek

Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
edited April 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10!
Where are you?
Are you in the closet of lies?
Are you under the bed of loyalty?
Are you behind the door of secrets?
Where are you?
Buried deep within the sheets of courage?
Beneath the table of dishonesty?
Where are you?
Let’s play hide and seek,
To see who can find real love.
"To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

--first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
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  • Brisk.Brisk. Posts: 11,561
    wow , cool

    nice work
  • Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
    thanx for the response :) i'll try not to take up so much space... maybe thread some together,... i just need the therapuetic outlet... i'm not looking for everyone's attention...
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
  • clifford_1972clifford_1972 Posts: 113
    That would make a good spoken word piece.kind of a game play feel to it.I like.
    "When a man lies,He murders some part of the world
    These are the pale deaths which men miscall their lives,All this I cannot bear to witness any longer,
    Cannot the kingdom of salvation,Take me home!"
    Cliff Burton R.I.PFebruary 10, 1962 – September 27, 1986
  • clifford_1972clifford_1972 Posts: 113
    Mystique420 wrote:
    1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10!
    Where are you?
    Are you in the closet of lies?
    Are you under the bed of loyalty?
    Are you behind the door of secrets?
    Where are you?
    Buried deep within the sheets of courage?
    Beneath the table of dishonesty?
    Where are you?
    Let’s play hide and seek,
    To see who can find real love.


    Where's that intelligent & passionate writer gone??? I can only speak for myself, but I sure wish you'd keep sharing your writings.
    "When a man lies,He murders some part of the world
    These are the pale deaths which men miscall their lives,All this I cannot bear to witness any longer,
    Cannot the kingdom of salvation,Take me home!"
    Cliff Burton R.I.PFebruary 10, 1962 – September 27, 1986
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