Contrition
Mystique420
Posts: 338
Another chance,
A contraction of time—
The last effort
To make our poem rhyme.
No more mistakes,
Not one single wet cheek—
This time we'll try
To be milder and meek.
A miracle,
A new kind of devotion—
Neither loses
Nor causes commotion.
These soft kisses,
This void in time and space—
Nothing wasted
Now we have found our place.
Never lonely,
Not lost in the dark fleet—
A new tribute
Almost close to complete.
The eons dragged,
Then out of the wild blue—
Another chance ...
Already I miss you.
A contraction of time—
The last effort
To make our poem rhyme.
No more mistakes,
Not one single wet cheek—
This time we'll try
To be milder and meek.
A miracle,
A new kind of devotion—
Neither loses
Nor causes commotion.
These soft kisses,
This void in time and space—
Nothing wasted
Now we have found our place.
Never lonely,
Not lost in the dark fleet—
A new tribute
Almost close to complete.
The eons dragged,
Then out of the wild blue—
Another chance ...
Already I miss you.
"To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."
--first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed--
nah,... we smoke it!
'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."
--first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed--
nah,... we smoke it!Post edited by Unknown User on
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EXTRAORDINARY!! That was fucking brilliant (sorry 4 cursing) but it's in a good way! You've got me longing and waiting not so patiently for what you'll share next. True talent & hopefully you know just how gifted you are. I'll try to "pm" you if that's cool? I'd love to have you share more with me? No, I'm not out to steal your work, you already told me it was all copyrighted, I just want to have some in private discussions about some of your work that you shared in this chat room. It's innocent
These are the pale deaths which men miscall their lives,All this I cannot bear to witness any longer,
Cannot the kingdom of salvation,Take me home!"
Cliff Burton R.I.PFebruary 10, 1962 – September 27, 1986