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Heaven's Soldiers

Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Heaven is crying
a flood of tears
soldiers are dying
too many years

Heaven is angry
lightening appears
soldiers keep fighting
they have no fears

Heaven is stating
bring soldiers home
families tired of waiting
no where to roam

Heaven still weeps
to keep our country free
crying out to brave soldiers
fighting for liberty
"To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

--first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
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  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    wonderful piece

    great flow
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Good read... :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
    thank u depop & twin :) i'm glad u liked them as they aren't exactly my favorites! i love feedback though... good or bad!
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
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