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Inferno

Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Astounding bloom of dusk
The radiant globe illuminates the abyss
Languishing at the horizon
The torch's aura shall touch the sea.

Fiery orb ignites upon the billows
Golden fingers dance across the azure surf
Aqua, turquoise and cyan swells
Melt to glistening ribbons of liquid metal.

Breathtaking aquatic flames sprawl
As the sphere set afire descends the briny deep
Copper, bronze and brass flicker
Drenched by brackish indigo drifts.

Fading brilliance of gloaming
Defusing to slumber in the high seas
Staggering breakers douse its blaze
The Sol extinguishes in salty depths
"To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

--first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I could hear the hiss and taste the burning coppery smell in the aftermath of it's extingishing swim. :) Very nice, Mystique420!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    I could hear the hiss and taste the burning coppery smell in the aftermath of it's extingishing swim. :) Very nice, Mystique420!


    Fantastic! I'm glad that someone understood where this was coming from & that someone else could envision themselves in those shose. Your a good egg BE! :)
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
  • Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
    tchaliz wrote:
    Hendrixian sunset Mystic,
    thanks,
    T


    that's probably one of the best compliments i've ever received.... i am humbled!
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
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