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In the Rain

Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'll dance in my mind to a private tune,
I'll do anything in memory of you,
You always knew I was a bit strange,
So make love to me here in the rain.

I'll swim naked in a pool of moonlight,
Climb to a mountain of the greatest height,
You laugh at me and say I'm insane,
Oh but darling, to make love in the rain.

You call me an imp just a bit of a fairy,
I'll giggle and laugh then you'll say I'm just scary,
I'll tease and cajole until you ears are in pain,
Admit it love, you wanna make love in the rain.
"To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

--first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
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  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    ahehe this poem made me feel so happy! seriously though... it's lovely. and besides just what it's about being sooo great... i love how the rhyming flows really nicely. it doesn't seem like you were TRYING to rhyme. It's almost like a really fortunate accident that you rhymed things. Perfect. :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
    thanx so much :) it's always nice to be welcomed with such kind words. i am glad that it evoked some good feeling out there!
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
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