I wrote this today.. what do you think?

binauralmanbinauralman Posts: 83
edited April 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
This song was inspired by my life.. it's based on being raised in a religion and growing up feeling the truth but still bewildered to know it.. please let me know what you think.


-Avail-

it's held, it's thought through
it's kept, it's felt through
believe.., he's then told too
entail, all lives through..

recieved and tunnled in a small belief
for imagination excepted in minor manor
not thought of before, encapsulated
for the truth to a young child
..thats all he can intake.

it's withered, it's torn through
still there, he hold's true
to him, he deems full
a belief he can't pull

taken.... held in
help him, help them
avail... avail them
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