Effects Of A Kiss

Nothingman54Nothingman54 Posts: 2,251
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
By what mystical powers of the night,

Does a kiss calm a raging sea

A kiss placed upon the lips

so soft, so tenderly

In a man his anger builds, like a violent tide

Emotions so strong, they stretch the shores ever wide

Its waves reaching high, leaving a thounderous crash in its

wake

As they rise and churn, these emotions he must put aside

For if he does not, reckless thoughts they do make

And yet, a kiss placed upon the lips

so soft, so tenderly

Can take this raging storm with its violent tides,

changing it to a sea of tranquillity

As the morning sun rises, casting her images upon the day

Calming the waters, as if they were in a peaceful bay

Glistning her beams of radiance from shore to shore

The feelings of a raging sea, I have no more

All of this, from a kiss

placed upon my lips, so soft, so tenderly
I'll be back
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Comments

  • Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
    That was magificent! I love kisses, making out, & snuggling almost as much as I love to make love,... I could spend hours and hours kissing... you wrote this poem perfectly... LOVE IT :p
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
  • Nothingman54Nothingman54 Posts: 2,251
    I love kisses, making out, & snuggling almost as much as I love to make love,... I could spend hours and hours kissing
    I'll be back
  • Nothingman54Nothingman54 Posts: 2,251
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I'll be back
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    You seem happy. :D
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    How sweet it is to be loved by U.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • Nothingman54Nothingman54 Posts: 2,251
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I'll be back
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Very wonderful...dreamy... :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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