Through A Pictures Eye

Nothingman54
Nothingman54 Posts: 2,251
edited June 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
She stairs at me only through a pictures eye

So scared to get close

So many years I'v tried

Rivers so deep

Skies stretch far and wide

So scared to get close

To scraed to ask why

So I sit here in regret while she watches from a pictures eye
I'll be back
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  • Jamal
    Jamal Posts: 2,115
    Wow,

    you can really feel emotion radiating from this one
    I'm in a similar situation, and you just described what I couldn't find appropriate words for

    Thank you for sharing this with us
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • Nothingman54
    Nothingman54 Posts: 2,251
    Thank you. Part of me thought I should make it longer, but I made a rule for myself to never go back and change any of them, because it was a certain feeling at a certain time. In the moment.
    I'll be back

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