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Effects Of A Kiss

Nothingman54Nothingman54 Posts: 2,251
edited June 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
By what mystical powers of the night,

Does a kiss calm a raging sea

A kiss placed upon the lips

so soft, so tenderly

In a man his anger builds, like a violent tide

Emotions so strong, they stretch the shores ever wide

Its waves reaching high, leaving a thounderous crash in its

wake

As they rise and churn, these emotions he must put aside

For if he does not, reckless thoughts they do make

And yet, a kiss placed upon the lips

so soft, so tenderly

Can take this raging storm with its violent tides,

changing it to a sea of tranquillity

As the morning sun rises, casting her images upon the day

Calming the waters, as if they were in a peaceful bay

Glistning her beams of radiance from shore to shore

The feelings of a raging sea, I have no more

All of this, from a kiss

placed upon my lips, so soft, so tenderly
I'll be back
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Comments

  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I ussually don't like these types of poems, but this one sucked me in. I really enjoyed it.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    very sweet. I'd like it if my kisses were that powerful.
  • eddies grrleddies grrl Posts: 509
    REALLY lovely poem. well done!
    Life is the riddle
    Of which we're caught in the middle.
    A couple of lucky ones
    Tangled up in too much love
    ~cowboy junkies
  • Nothingman54Nothingman54 Posts: 2,251
    Thank You!
    I'll be back
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    When are we going to get some new stuff?
    (becoming quite a fan :o)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • Nothingman54Nothingman54 Posts: 2,251
    Jamal wrote:
    When are we going to get some new stuff?
    (becoming quite a fan :o)


    I will come up with more soon.
    I'll be back
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    wow...I really enjoyed this one! :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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