Darkness

Nothingman54Nothingman54 Posts: 2,251
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Walking through the shadowless night
No moon anywhere in sight
Darkness seems to cloud my mind
No sense of direction
No sense of time
I'll find the light
So dark and bright
I'll find the light

Hearing voices inside my head
Saying you'd be better off dead
I try to fight the urge
All I remember are
Her words
I'll find the light
So dark and bright
I'll find the light
I'll be back
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  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    A whole lot of contra diction going on.
    Heavy times.
    Thanx
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • Walking through the shadowless night
    No moon anywhere in sight
    Darkness seems to cloud my mind
    No sense of direction
    No sense of time
    I'll find the light
    So dark and bright
    I'll find the light

    Hearing voices inside my head
    Saying you'd be better off dead
    I try to fight the urge
    All I remember are
    Her words
    I'll find the light
    So dark and bright
    I'll find the light


    hmm,
    I really liked this.
    yessss
    join the darkside
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • gtxgtx Posts: 17
    though there can only be darkness with lack of light
    a flick of the switch and all is bright
    no more darkness
    if hearts ignite.

    nice potrait of confusion and torment,nothingman54, and a nice way to fight..
    remember her words...beautiful.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Walking through the shadowless night
    No moon anywhere in sight
    Darkness seems to cloud my mind
    No sense of direction
    No sense of time
    I'll find the light
    So dark and bright
    I'll find the light

    Hearing voices inside my head
    Saying you'd be better off dead
    I try to fight the urge
    All I remember are
    Her words
    I'll find the light
    So dark and bright
    I'll find the light

    And the light shall come,
    wavering in your heart,
    your soul led afire by God's
    consequential grasp.
    For ytou are not alone,
    protection runs rampant in the city.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
    Ali wrote:
    And the light shall come,
    wavering in your heart,
    your soul led afire by God's
    consequential grasp.
    For ytou are not alone,
    protection runs rampant in the city.


    I liked the original poem, and if you added that Ali... I thought it was a nice tag. Very impressive to you both!! Keep em coming!
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
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