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Love

Nothingman54Nothingman54 Posts: 2,251
edited June 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I wanna hold you and never let you go
I wanna run through open fields and run bare foot in the snow
I wanna sing and dance naked in the rain
I'll give you all my love and take away all your pain
I wanna sit on the beach
In the sand
Lip to lip
Hand in hand
I'll be back
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Comments

  • bluejourneymanbluejourneyman Posts: 421
    Well put!!!
    Can't you see that there's light in the dark.
    Nothing's quite what it seems in the city of dreams.
    (Wolfmother)
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Grand Rapids 2006
  • FelicityFelicity Posts: 339
    i have to go brush my teeth.
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    I like this one a lot.
  • Nothingman54Nothingman54 Posts: 2,251
    This one is my fav. I wish I would have made it longer. Oh well

    Thanks
    I'll be back
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    Well, you can keep this one the way it is,
    and if you want to extend it, make like a part 2
    or something. :)
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    it think of it like this : in it's shortness lies it's strength
    It leaves you wanting more, just like the feeling that's described
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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