the pit

GARDENerGARDENer Posts: 19
edited November 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
its dark
quick flashes of light rain down like some kind of wild disco
strangers crowd in close
so close you can feel the bodies all around you
your shoved from side to side and front to back
at the mercy of this cult like mob you are helpless
a gibson les paul takes you deeper and deeper into a perfect parallel of time and space
your soaked of sweat
limbs burn from the constant struggle to not get drug under
you wish this place would never end
as u suddenly realize
i live for the pit



inspired by london 07, 20 feet from the stage, first pj gm.

long live general admission
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