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past anticipation

nside20nside20 Posts: 29
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Rolling on top
kissing the mouth of you
trying to seperate the soul.
We sound like traffic
in the night air
and on into the morning
we tumble like tigers
licking faces clean
last traces of summer lust
swallowed whole
saturated past
anticipation.
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Comments

  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    "We sound like traffic
    in the night air"

    Oooo, I like that line, nside20! I feel fire and passion in this poem and I like it! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Yes, this one is good. :)
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