about a minutes worth

nside20
nside20 Posts: 29
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
spent too much time
spitting in the wind
confused the the colorforms
and the contraband
sizing up the summersaults
watch the world in glimpses
how old is too old
to put your ass
over your head
forget the punctuation
the tiny pauses that direct the
feeling
forget the pipers pipe
see if the page
bleeds when cut
see if there is any sense
in spitting in the wind
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  • Mystique420
    Mystique420 Posts: 338
    oddly enough... that makes sooooo much sense to me. i like it,.... so... please share more!
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
  • nside20
    nside20 Posts: 29
    that's what came out for ninty+ seconds,It was kind of like spinning a globe and putting your finger somewhere to make it stop. Glad you liked it though, I've got maybe 4 others up here probably starting back 1st week in feb.

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