Today

walkerlastgen1

We're all digging for diamond mines and
all we seem to find is clay
Won't something shine out through the grey..
today

we're all scratching the surface
until our fingernails grind away
i can't seem to turn my head away..
Today

The black hole can't lead to heaven..
somethings jerking on my reigns
I can't seem to find the nerve to complain
Today

The track forks off to glory
and the world derails the train
let's leap and roll across the plain
Today

walkerlastgen1

walkerlastgen1 wrote:

We're all digging for diamond mines and
all we seem to find is clay
Won't something shine out through the grey..
today

we're all scratching the surface
until our fingernails grind away
i can't seem to turn my head away..
Today

The black hole can't lead to heaven..
somethings jerking on my reigns
I can't seem to find the nerve to complain
Today

The track forks off to glory
and the world derails the train
let's leap and roll across the plain
Today

I know it's "tacky to reply to my own thread I just would really like some feedback on this

paescu

very nice words!

walkerlastgen1

walkerlastgen1 wrote:

We're all digging for diamond mines and
all we seem to find is clay
Won't something shine out through the grey..
today

we're all scratching the surface
until our fingernails grind away
i can't seem to turn my head away..
Today

The black hole can't lead to heaven..
somethings jerking on my reigns
I can't seem to find the nerve to complain
Today

The track forks off to glory
and the world derails the train
let's leap and roll across the plain
Today

listen to it at http://www.myspace.com/lastgeneration56

DopeBeastie

dude, is this the Human Race song?

did you upload more, today?

love the last stanza, most especially the first two lines of it. something really simple and clear and


yeah... the world derails the train


rock on

walkerlastgen1

yea but it is still processin.. this one is more complete..

DopeBeastie

well, this one is my more favorite of the two
i like it a lot

walkerlastgen1

Today is up now if you haven't heard it yet... thanks guys and gals and other and both...

DopeBeastie

Hey, Walker!


checked out "Today", today... very nice. For a moment, I actually forgot that I wasn't listening to "A Soundtrack for Future Americans", anymore.

Rosey is good too, except that crash symbol in the first verse, lol... that has to go :D:D:D. Your riffs are really really good. Don't stop. Find that band


Rachel

walkerlastgen1

thanks for the comments.... i can only take credit for the lyrics and vocals ( 3 tracks worth I might add) on rosey love song. And that echo really kills the song. The music was written by a guy named Daniel White. The drums are just preset keyboard patterns. Today was all written by me .. and I played every track exept for drums and bass.

DopeBeastie

this IS my favorite tune of yours, btw