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bruised

pinonpinon Posts: 427
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
forced against
cold brick walls

abused, accused

our shared face
warped with rage

my wrists bruised

eat my spilled bowels
taste the ugly truth
of life and love

rape my soul
release me
Life is too serious to be taken seriously
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    WOW! Very powerful and painful, pinon!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Brisk.Brisk. Posts: 11,561
    yes, very nice!!

    striking too!!
  • pinonpinon Posts: 427
    Thx !!!!!!!!!! :)
    Life is too serious to be taken seriously
  • Brisk.Brisk. Posts: 11,561
    geese, i cant write poems etc for shit!
  • pinonpinon Posts: 427
    did you ever try ;)

    (I browsed back 7 pages or something to see if there were anything from you, couldn´t find anything)

    maybe you would surprise yourself if you tried :D
    Life is too serious to be taken seriously
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    Hey, missed this B4

    really good work here!
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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