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Flayer multifarious

pinonpinon Posts: 427
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art

Flayer Multifarious
Nails on blackboard
Stretching rubberband
Nature´s law abolished
Floating rocks and sinking feathers
Unabsorbable accumulating noise
String around waist
yo-yo
High, low............low, high
Space-deprived hide
No capturing the image
Grindstone,
abraded cranium
Duck-tape repaired layers peel
Skinned calf thrown
limbless across threshing floors
Eyes pulled from socket
Swelled bowels swallow tongue
Floating letters under ceiling,
deform upon descension
Fry as moths crashing lightbulb
Crispy handful burned bugs
Vanish with a single breath
The equivalent of pain
is lacking words
Life is too serious to be taken seriously
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    :D

    This is very expressive of something unpleasant!! :)
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  • pinonpinon Posts: 427
    Thank you for that grin :)
    I don´t care how naked I come across at this point, I´m totally waisted and
    "skin-depraved" right now.... unpleasant yes, but necessary. Thank you for handing over a cloth to help clean up the spilled blood. A hug for you. Thx!
    Life is too serious to be taken seriously
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    You're welcome. :)
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  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    The equivalent of pain
    is lacking words

    I like the last line, the best.

    I'm not sure if I got this right but,

    it reminds me off myself.

    Pain is best ecpret in tears, but what if you're all cryed dry, you could try and tell, but talking about it doesn't really get you the same sympathy as tears do. Tus you must not be expressing yourself properly, the short comeing of the right words makes one feel lonelly. so in the end it brings you more pain. Not talking about it sometimes seems to bring distance between you and the pain. words are dangerous


    Anyway thats what it reminded me about.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    pinon wrote:
    Thank you for that grin :)
    I don´t care how naked I come across at this point, I´m totally waisted and
    "skin-depraved" right now.... unpleasant yes, but necessary. Thank you for handing over a cloth to help clean up the spilled blood. A hug for you. Thx!

    :D I think you should remain naked! :D Very interesting poem there, pinon. I like how it looks and the last 2 lines definitely sum it up beautifully. I hope you keep laying down your words s well as your pics. You're very talented. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • pinonpinon Posts: 427
    thank you, Karma and BeingE... :)
    uff....didnt see your reply earlier.....these days I get stuck in the porch, looking for Euronews.... *smacks head* I cant wait any longer !!....
    ermmm...sorry....thats of topic :D
    Life is too serious to be taken seriously
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