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fear

pinonpinon Posts: 427
edited May 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art

shapeless fear
owns no words
hoover and dive
dance, tempt, seduce
a rhythm with no beat
always pounding
taste sweet blade
recognizable pain
a relief
Life is too serious to be taken seriously
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    lost
    it all just dissapears
    out of my grasp
    the things i want
    colorful
    beautiful

    loving
    the way i feel for you
    appreciative
    should of always been

    i just wanted to say thanks
    ive created many beautiful things because of you
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • ChrisDChrisD Posts: 48
    deadnote wrote:
    lost
    it all just dissapears
    out of my grasp
    the things i want
    colorful
    beautiful

    loving
    the way i feel for you
    appreciative
    should of always been

    i just wanted to say thanks
    ive created many beautiful things because of you

    quite amazing how you can make a thread concerning someone else posting a poem about YOU. Are you a relative of Oprah Winfrey?
    "Ransom paid the Devil, he whispers pleasing words.
    Triumphant are the angels if they can get there first."
  • ChrisDChrisD Posts: 48
    pinon wrote:

    shapeless fear
    owns no words
    hoover and dive
    dance, tempt, seduce
    a rhythm with no beat
    always pounding
    taste sweet blade
    recognizable pain
    a relief

    nice poem, i wouldnt mind hearing this on audio.
    "Ransom paid the Devil, he whispers pleasing words.
    Triumphant are the angels if they can get there first."
  • pinonpinon Posts: 427
    Thx :) ....to bad I´m completely tone-deaf then ;)
    Life is too serious to be taken seriously
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    You took some shapeless fear and gave it some shape! :)
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