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Sick Feeling

snowcovereddunnsnowcovereddunn Posts: 27
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I see them drive up
mom is pregnant and he is pissed
he is always pissed off
i would be pissed too
if i were that pathetic
there he goes
he back handed her
that f**ker
i feel sick
i'm scared
i just want to leave
i wish i had a gun
i would do it
i would f**king kill him
i would love to see him gone
why are they together
so much chaos
please protect my little brother God
i want to throw up
i am a nervous wreck
i hate confrintation
why cant things be quite
why does misery...
out way the love....
i guess because there is none
Arms wide open with the sea as his floor.....
Believe in things again like when you were a child.
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  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    I found this to be very intense.
    there's some other feeling I got too but I can't really describe it.
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • snowcovereddunnsnowcovereddunn Posts: 27
    eMMI wrote:
    I found this to be very intense.
    there's some other feeling I got too but I can't really describe it.

    those were intense times, what is your other feeling maybe I can help
    Arms wide open with the sea as his floor.....
    Believe in things again like when you were a child.
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    snowcovereddunn wrote:
    those were intense times, what is your other feeling maybe I can help

    I don't know. anger obviously.. and something that could be described as hopelessness.

    and this also reminded me of a book. Way Past Cool by Jess Mowry.
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • snowcovereddunnsnowcovereddunn Posts: 27
    eMMI wrote:
    I don't know. anger obviously.. and something that could be described as hopelessness.

    and this also reminded me of a book. Way Past Cool by Jess Mowry.

    yes, and yes. I did feel very hopeless I was 10 at the time, so in my mind there was a long way to go before i was on my own. i'll have to check that book out.
    Arms wide open with the sea as his floor.....
    Believe in things again like when you were a child.
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    snowcovereddunn wrote:
    yes, and yes. I did feel very hopeless I was 10 at the time, so in my mind there was a long way to go before i was on my own. i'll have to check that book out.

    hmm. funny how no matter what feelings this poem brings out in me I still like it.

    it's a good book. made me think.
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • snowcovereddunnsnowcovereddunn Posts: 27
    eMMI wrote:
    hmm. funny how no matter what feelings this poem brings out in me I still like it.

    it's a good book. made me think.

    thanks for the great feed back, means a lot.
    Arms wide open with the sea as his floor.....
    Believe in things again like when you were a child.
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    snowcovereddunn wrote:
    thanks for the great feed back, means a lot.

    it's my pleasure. I know how important feed bakc is to me so it has to mean a lot to other people too.

    thank you for sharing your work and please continue to do so. :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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