you wouldn't understand

RedOak1999RedOak1999 Posts: 4
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
everyone says it better then me
knows the rhyme and meter
twist the words
never trite
never weepy
exposing the core
while I just botch

Read Bellow or Dillelo or Devo
if you want greatness
all I do is botch
reach for greatness?
I thought the line said "ordinary"

Why am I here?
to carry my weight
as I rip off Bellow
he's really...GREAT!!!(rhyming!)

fuck all y'all
but moreso me
I'm Open
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  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    “Ah, but a man's reach should exceed his grasp, or what's a heaven for?”
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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