wHATever...WIthouT you (rewrite by Being Engligtned)

jaqueline huyer

I've never seen you
I've never been with you
Crazy love
I can tell you
I can write these words to you
What i'm feling
About my love for you
I've never seen you
I've neber been with you
Crazy love
I can't get close to you
I can't touch to you
It's impossible
It's impossible
I've never seen you
I've never been with you
Crazy love
Words i can tell you
Words i can write to you
lost words
Between the lines
On this paper
Without color
Without taste
I've never met you
I've never seen you
I've never been with you
Crazy love
Maybe i'll be painting a wall
With colorful words,
Colorful songs
Maybe i'll die
Without seeing you
Without having you
I've never seen you
I've never been with you
Crazy love
I'ts Magical love
I'm drunk on love
I'm falling in love
To have you
To see you
To touch you
Crazy love...

So this is my friend (Being Enlightened) rewrite for me i think i'ts MUCH better now!!! i want to say also THANK YOU TO HIM!!! I REALLY APPRECIATE !!!

Anyway i WOULD like to SAY TO EVERYBODY""""" HAVE A GREAT CRISTMAS DAY AND THE MOST IMPORTANT , BEST and happy NEw yEAR!!!
Para todos um Feliz Natal e um Ano Novo Cheio de Alegrias!!! Much love jackie.

coachchris

Very beautiful, thanks for sharing! Stay safe over the hollidays

Being Enlightened

Aw, Jackie! I only helped you with the english a bit. And you know what? After seeing it here, I think it needs some punctuation too, so, I hope you don't mind, but I added a little. I'm not the grestest at this but I think it looks better like this:

"I've never seen you,
I've never been with you,
Crazy love

I can tell you,
I can write these words to you,
what I'm feeling
about my love for you,

I've never seen you,
I've never been with you,
Crazy love

I can't get close to you,
I can't touch you,
it's impossible,
it's impossible

I've never seen you,
I've never been with you,
Crazy love

Words I can tell you,
words I can write to you,
lost words
between the lines
on this paper,
without color,
without taste,

I've never met you,
I've never seen you,
I've never been with you,
crazy love

Maybe I'll be painting a wall
with colorful words,
colorful songs,
maybe I'll die
without seeing you,
without having you...

I've never seen you,
I've never been with you,
Crazy love

It's magical love,
I'm drunk on love,
I'm falling in love!

To have you,
to see you,
to touch you,
Crazy love..."




What do you think?


Oh,

and Jackie, I'm a girl. AND - Para todos um Feliz Natal e um Ano Novo Cheio de Alegrias, to you too! You're a sweetheart!