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justdannojustdanno Posts: 24
edited April 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I just wrote this poem in the last three minutes of my last class.

I just want dance
while dreams come true
I can sing
A song about me and you
I need to live
a life of endless dreams

For baby this worlds
got be crying
Baby I'm crying
Trying to fill my empty well
Cause i want to die
so I can keep going
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  • justdannojustdanno Posts: 24
    I screwd up on this line
    got be crying>>>> it should be>> Got me Crying
    sorry for the typo
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