10 > 83

haffajappahaffajappa British Columbia Posts: 5,955
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
had to do a parody of a poem in english class today ("this is just to say" by william carlos williams), thought i'd post it here instead of the porch. its directed towards my best friend, and is somewhat of an inside joke. my other friend calls it 'the battle of the fan clubs'... i titled it 10 is greater than 83. :)

it goes a little something like this:

i have burned
the shrine
that you
had made for
dear John M.

to which
you have probably
drooled
for monthes

appologies,
but he was simply
no match
for my
Ed Vedder.
live pearl jam is best pearl jam
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Comments

  • HA HA! That was cute! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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