Another dedication

mad22mad22 Posts: 82
edited October 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Hello pj people around the globe, here i am again, needing of you honest oppinion. A while ago i wrote a dedicacion to girl and because of your kind feedback i decided to give to her and she love it. So thanks for that.

Again, i have a friend who help me alot when i most needed, and given that i'm really hard to express my feelings, y always in doubt about if she really know how thankfull i am for what she did.

So, i'm writing a dedication with the intention to be very clear about how much she means to me. This time i wrote it in spanich (last time was english), so i will translate it to you, so something may be lost in translation, but what matter the most is the message, so i wanted to know what you think about it.
My objective is that she realize that i love her very much and that she's the most amazing human i've ever known so far. So here i give you what i wrote and let me know what you think. As always, insights of every kind, good or bad are most than welcome, but please be honest, if you think isn't really good tell me please!!!

Thank you all and is it:

Letter to Alice

I write to you because i feel
I write to you because i've feel in debt
I write to you because i want you to know
how much i love you

When i thougt that i lost everything
When i thougt that there wasn't anything else
When i found my self alone in the world
When the only thing i had was nothing
You gave me everything

And I, I discoverd a gorgeous person
and not because you are beautiful, wich you are
and not because you save me, wich you did
you are gorgeous because your love is pure
you are gorgeous because living is hard
but it's easy living with you

i wish i could give you or say something
that represents how much you mean to me
but there are no words, no things
that could express how much i love you

the only thing that i can do
is to tell you that you
that you are never going to be alone
becasuse i'm not gonna let you
and i will always be happy helping you
listening to you, just being you friend

I write to you because you are unique
because you bring the best of me
but above all things
I write to you because i love you
without conditions, without pretexts

I write to you because you are worth to much
to not tell you
And i love you too much
to not write you

thank you ali!!!

Matias.-
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