Intimate Setting+Great Music=All Night Thing

DowecheatemnhowDowecheatemnhow Posts: 158
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Up and down, in and out,
the sound of music flits about.
Pulsing, aching, needs and desires.
Heat and flame of blazing fires.

Soft and mellow, spiraling low,
unbroken strain of music's flow.
Whistling winds in heaven above
between two hills, the peaks of love.

Hard and driving, ascending grand,
love-notes coming from your hand.
The bow of bodies together strung,
the sweetest notes of love unsung.

Lightning bolts and thunder crashes.
Each pulse and rhythm gently clashes.
The cry of triumph fills the night.
Stars of heaven glimmer bright.

The music is over, its climbing beat.
The memory remains and lingers sweet.
I can hear what you're thinking,.. All your doubts & fears,... If U look in my eye,... In time you'll find,... the reason I'm here,.. In time U may come back somday,.. To live once more-- or die once more-- In time your time,... will be no more,...
Johnny Cash (to Frank Castle/The Punisher)
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  • Lightning Crashes, yes it does...

    this sounds damn near perfectly romantic,... and indeed, the song remains the same... i guess classicism is afloat in the tenclub today!

    anyway,... i'm wondering what you think of the old addage that cheaters never prosper...?

    ~just some food for thought from the ole velveteen rabbit.... nice work!
    change begins with discontent.
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223

    anyway,... i'm wondering what you think of the old addage that cheaters never prosper...?

    ~just some food for thought from the ole velveteen rabbit.... nice work!


    What are ya Elmer Fuddin' about now?
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Just jokin'. I get ya. :)
  • i am glad u could understand him cuz i sure as fuck don't!!!
    I can hear what you're thinking,.. All your doubts & fears,... If U look in my eye,... In time you'll find,... the reason I'm here,.. In time U may come back somday,.. To live once more-- or die once more-- In time your time,... will be no more,...
    Johnny Cash (to Frank Castle/The Punisher)
  • i am glad u could understand him cuz i sure as fuck don't!!!

    dont play dumb, or play me for dumb.. i denied a wonderfully sweet and completely sincere valentines connection for u and received not one word, and i am supposed to dignify u now? you're lucky, i care as much as i do and cant ignore u even when i should.

    i think i'm gonna go to sleep now [and try to dream that i have never listened to the kelly slater show--"huh, you said ass, huh huh" (thank you Ed for at salvaging that moment from 'the great debacle')] and grab some rest, maybe go camping for a week or so in the morning.

    be good tenclub!;)
    change begins with discontent.
  • dont play dumb, or play me for dumb.. i denied a wonderfully sweet and completely sincere valentines connection for u and received not one word, and i am supposed to dignify u now? you're lucky, i care as much as i do and cant ignore u even when i should.

    i think i'm gonna go to sleep now [and try to dream that i have never listened to the kelly slater show--"huh, you said ass, huh huh" (thank you Ed for at salvaging that moment from 'the great debacle')] and grab some rest, maybe go camping for a week or so in the morning.

    be good tenclub!;)

    u didn't deserve one fucking word from me after the bullshit u pulled,... whoever u r today,... i can't tell,... sybil??? three faces of eve??? U R lucky that I even spent one moment of my life being geniune with u-- as for sincerity-- u reap what u sow and what u put me through was far from wonderfully sweet-- ignore me,... other way around pal-- camping??? tell ya what,.. why don't you do just that-- except stay there-- u will go off camping in your mind because that is where u live-- nothing u say or do is or ever has been REAL-- well,... U R A REAL ASS!!! U make less sense than that sorry ass interview!
    I can hear what you're thinking,.. All your doubts & fears,... If U look in my eye,... In time you'll find,... the reason I'm here,.. In time U may come back somday,.. To live once more-- or die once more-- In time your time,... will be no more,...
    Johnny Cash (to Frank Castle/The Punisher)
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Maybe you two should use pms? It's kind of embarassing to read this on the board. :(
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  • forgive me for butting in- you know what they say about opinions though, and here's mine:

    It sounds to me like you were both waiting for the other to make the first move, and you both Froze. Don't let a frozen moment ruin what had to've been Real!! If it wasn't 'Real' it would not have generated this level of emotion. No Camping, No fighting, just take a deep breath and remember all that has been shared. Take another deep breath, and next time instead of freezing, Both of you Move Toward Each Other!! That is what's needed here- again, just my humble opinion!?!?!
    "Don't turn away from possible futures unless you're certain you have nothing to learn from them."
  • justam wrote:
    Maybe you two should use pms? It's kind of embarassing to read this on the board. :(
    yep, i'm out.
    change begins with discontent.
  • forgive me for butting in- you know what they say about opinions though, and here's mine:

    It sounds to me like you were both waiting for the other to make the first move, and you both Froze. Don't let a frozen moment ruin what had to've been Real!! If it wasn't 'Real' it would not have generated this level of emotion. No Camping, No fighting, just take a deep breath and remember all that has been shared. Take another deep breath, and next time instead of freezing, Both of you Move Toward Each Other!! That is what's needed here- again, just my humble opinion!?!?!

    Thanx, but HE froze-- and hid-- I on the other hand put my life up for the taking for him, and all he can do is act as a boy--
    I can hear what you're thinking,.. All your doubts & fears,... If U look in my eye,... In time you'll find,... the reason I'm here,.. In time U may come back somday,.. To live once more-- or die once more-- In time your time,... will be no more,...
    Johnny Cash (to Frank Castle/The Punisher)
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