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Love, love, love,... U!!!!

DowecheatemnhowDowecheatemnhow Posts: 158
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
You finger my body with words of desire;
and I am lost, completely vexed.
You make me burn, infinite fire;
and I am yours, utterly perplexed.

You kiss my lips with the breath of air,
and I savor your masculine taste.
You take me, caressing me everywhere,
rocking your hips, holding my waist.

You touch my skin with moonbeam sighs,
streaming through my window at night.
You slip in between my creamy thighs,
tonguing me softly till I scream in delight.

You suck my nipples with the cool blowing breeze,
moving your tongue around in delicate spheres.
You lay your body between my knees
and open me up till I plead in tears.

I beg of you take me as your lips hungrily feed
upon the flesh of my body, one with you.
I beg of you, fill me, fulfill my need,
this hunger burning and ripping me through.

You make love to me until my body is aching,
and you lick and touch and taste your rose.
You consume all my passion till my legs are shaking,
until my heart just overflows.

And I ask of you again, "My darling, please!
I need you, to feel you, inside of me, anew;"
and you laugh as you once again part my knees
and give to me what I ask of you.

God! How I want you, hopelessly lost.
I hope you can feel my plight.
I love you and need you, no matter the cost.
Please, darling, make love to me, tonight.
I can hear what you're thinking,.. All your doubts & fears,... If U look in my eye,... In time you'll find,... the reason I'm here,.. In time U may come back somday,.. To live once more-- or die once more-- In time your time,... will be no more,...
Johnny Cash (to Frank Castle/The Punisher)
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  • imspinninimspinnin Posts: 933
    Hit's home....thanks for sharing. :)
    If I could be anything in the world I would be your teardrop...I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheeks, and die on your lips.
  • Nothingman54Nothingman54 Posts: 2,251
    Thats great!
    I'll be back
  • alluneedisluvalluneedisluv Posts: 97
    time for a cold one..

    shower, that is :-)
    "Don't turn away from possible futures unless you're certain you have nothing to learn from them."
  • DowecheatemnhowDowecheatemnhow Posts: 158
    Thanx for the feedback,... lately I've been unable to sort out the mess in my mind, but I think I am over the writer's block,... Glad to bring out all of the different emotions in all of u :)
    I can hear what you're thinking,.. All your doubts & fears,... If U look in my eye,... In time you'll find,... the reason I'm here,.. In time U may come back somday,.. To live once more-- or die once more-- In time your time,... will be no more,...
    Johnny Cash (to Frank Castle/The Punisher)
  • alluneedisluvalluneedisluv Posts: 97
    oh, you brought out emotion alright, and ya better stop it, my kids are still up!!!! lol
    "Don't turn away from possible futures unless you're certain you have nothing to learn from them."
  • imspinninimspinnin Posts: 933
    alluneedisluv wrote:
    oh, you brought out emotion alright, and ya better stop it, my kids are still up!!!! lol
    may I recommend a romatic suspense novel:D
    If I could be anything in the world I would be your teardrop...I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheeks, and die on your lips.
  • alluneedisluvalluneedisluv Posts: 97
    why would I need that when I've got this post, I've already printed it and tucked it under my pillow LOL :-)
    "Don't turn away from possible futures unless you're certain you have nothing to learn from them."
  • DowecheatemnhowDowecheatemnhow Posts: 158
    alluneedisluv wrote:
    why would I need that when I've got this post, I've already printed it and tucked it under my pillow LOL :-)

    that's uuuhh,... good I guess??? I'm glad that I can make U all feel,... the one it was written for trashed it & didn't bear one iota of feeling for it,.. from it,.. whatever-- fuck it.
    I can hear what you're thinking,.. All your doubts & fears,... If U look in my eye,... In time you'll find,... the reason I'm here,.. In time U may come back somday,.. To live once more-- or die once more-- In time your time,... will be no more,...
    Johnny Cash (to Frank Castle/The Punisher)
  • imspinninimspinnin Posts: 933
    alluneedisluv wrote:
    why would I need that when I've got this post, I've already printed it and tucked it under my pillow LOL :-)
    read it to your hubby...only if your "up" to it!!:D
    If I could be anything in the world I would be your teardrop...I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheeks, and die on your lips.
  • imspinninimspinnin Posts: 933
    Dowecheatemnhow wrote:
    that's uuuhh,... good I guess??? I'm glad that I can make U all feel,... the one it was written for trashed it & didn't bear one iota of feeling for it,.. from it,.. whatever-- fuck it.
    What an ass...well sweetie, I enjoyed it...if you ever want to quit your day job you can always fall back on writing, ya got talent!!;)
    If I could be anything in the world I would be your teardrop...I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheeks, and die on your lips.
  • alluneedisluvalluneedisluv Posts: 97
    imspinnin wrote:
    read it to your hubby...only if your "up" to it!!:D
    ahem, ahem *clears throat* hold on...I'm tryin' my *sexy voice* lol
    "Don't turn away from possible futures unless you're certain you have nothing to learn from them."
  • DowecheatemnhowDowecheatemnhow Posts: 158
    imspinnin wrote:
    What an ass...well sweetie, I enjoyed it...if you ever want to quit your day job you can always fall back on writing, ya got talent!!;)


    Thanx!! :)
    I can hear what you're thinking,.. All your doubts & fears,... If U look in my eye,... In time you'll find,... the reason I'm here,.. In time U may come back somday,.. To live once more-- or die once more-- In time your time,... will be no more,...
    Johnny Cash (to Frank Castle/The Punisher)
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