get a life

bigbillbigbill Posts: 42
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
all of the people in this pit need too get a life
if this is all you got you should end your life
pity is for the weak, if not strong
how will you ever belong
the otherside you might belong
but your holding out to long
apparently twin 2 is that way
maybe i might end it for her today
life is what you make of it
life is just not in this pit
i bet you all will say i'm a pr-ck



p.s i'm just teasing my better half twin2. yes i know i'm not going to died of having a big heart
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  • dearest big bill
    you need to chill
    and rethink the message to the pit
    it's sounding a wee like bull-shit
    since you are now here with us all
    you might as well start taking down walls
    as opposed to building them with the "get a life"
    who knows, twin 2 could be a super woman disguised as wife.
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    See and we all thought you had no writing talent! You may even learn a thing or two. Brave man to come in here and get bashed! Look forward to your next one which I am sure will cause much controversy!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • I thought we went over this yesterday,
    You wont stay, for a while
    I know you know what I’m gonna say,
    I hope, its gonna make you smile

    Cos my desire, has found a place,
    Within you it lies, its written on my face
    So fuel my fire, emancipate,
    And make me a portrait of a happy face

    My mother called me a filthy liar,
    She thought that I was a dirty fake,
    My dissolution grew higher and higher
    You, make the changes I needed to make

    Cos my desire, has found a place,
    Within you it lies, its written on my face
    So fuel my fire, emancipate,
    And make me a portrait of a happy face

    Its always easy to see the world,
    In shades of grey and hypocracy
    I find its easier to see you girl
    As a reason to breathe and be a family

    Young singer songwriter trying to decide whether to screw work off and write music more then just at weekends! - peace out x
  • you're disclaimer at the end ruined it for me. ;)
    i wanted to get offended. :D
    ha.
    Stay with me...
    Let's just breathe...


    I am myself like you somehow


  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Ok. I said it, you're a prick.
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    twin2 wrote:
    Ok. I said it, you're a prick.

    At least you know your man well sis...
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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