Fluid...
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Hello from Poland!
I'm new here :-)
I would like to share one of my lyrics...all the lyrics I write are strongly inspired by ed lyrics...I'm from Poland and I learned english mainly by translating pearl jam songs...they are very important to me...from about 10 years ... I love the way ed write...poetry...stories...full of metaphores...
so please read....and tell me what do you think...does my lyrics somehow "talk" to you...?
so..
Fluid
music: Root | lyrics: M. Pacholski
So it's the day he passed the path alone
And took a way towards the sun
These very moment at 5 a.m. he couldn't wait and had to go
Now the shades are coming from afar
Still hear the voices in my head
I close my eyes so wide awake and let myself believe in God
Going down the way to the other side of our dreams
Sitting on the bed I can't recognize your breath
I took it on ma back, so my hands are full of sins
Broken like the wave, I will stand again someday
It's like a fluid from afar
So be aware, don't touch the flame
You see your face now in the mirror, you see the past that should have burned
I wave to you and say goodbye
The shade of red is not so strong
It is sad we all get to the light and we cannot stray in dark, not anymore
Going down the way to the other side of our dreams
Sitting on the bed I can't recognize your breath
I took it on ma back, so my hands are full of sins
Broken like the wave, I will stand again someday
if you want to, you can hear the song here(intro is a little bit too long I think;-) ):
http://www.rootband.band.pl/Muzyka/rootfluid.mp3
it's my band's song...
so...thanks...for you attention
Mark
I'm new here :-)
I would like to share one of my lyrics...all the lyrics I write are strongly inspired by ed lyrics...I'm from Poland and I learned english mainly by translating pearl jam songs...they are very important to me...from about 10 years ... I love the way ed write...poetry...stories...full of metaphores...
so please read....and tell me what do you think...does my lyrics somehow "talk" to you...?
so..
Fluid
music: Root | lyrics: M. Pacholski
So it's the day he passed the path alone
And took a way towards the sun
These very moment at 5 a.m. he couldn't wait and had to go
Now the shades are coming from afar
Still hear the voices in my head
I close my eyes so wide awake and let myself believe in God
Going down the way to the other side of our dreams
Sitting on the bed I can't recognize your breath
I took it on ma back, so my hands are full of sins
Broken like the wave, I will stand again someday
It's like a fluid from afar
So be aware, don't touch the flame
You see your face now in the mirror, you see the past that should have burned
I wave to you and say goodbye
The shade of red is not so strong
It is sad we all get to the light and we cannot stray in dark, not anymore
Going down the way to the other side of our dreams
Sitting on the bed I can't recognize your breath
I took it on ma back, so my hands are full of sins
Broken like the wave, I will stand again someday
if you want to, you can hear the song here(intro is a little bit too long I think;-) ):
http://www.rootband.band.pl/Muzyka/rootfluid.mp3
it's my band's song...
so...thanks...for you attention
Mark
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It was a good listen.
http://www.rootband.band.pl/main.htm
mp3 section
By the way...WHAT ABOUT PEARL JAM EUROPEAN TOUR???????????
WHEEEN ?????
:-)
"Going down the way to the other side of our dreams
Sitting on the bed I can't recognize your breath
I took it on ma back, so my hands are full of sins
Broken like the wave, I will stand again someday"
I like the PJ reference of breath recognition and I like when people turn sins into something visual, that can be held and counted and such. Please do post more!!!