The victim way
Ana Claudia
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(Sorry about my English, is not my first language, ok?)
The torrent cames strong
washes all the asphalt
the street continues like victim,
pleasant
wishes that be a girl,
proud of melancholy
benefit from and
in that, find my happiness,
sip the water bit by bit,
leave the happiness of the sadness
with me!
It is no use to clean the obstacles,
in such a way that,
it always cames,
from the torrential river of my life.
The torrent cames strong
washes all the asphalt
the street continues like victim,
pleasant
wishes that be a girl,
proud of melancholy
benefit from and
in that, find my happiness,
sip the water bit by bit,
leave the happiness of the sadness
with me!
It is no use to clean the obstacles,
in such a way that,
it always cames,
from the torrential river of my life.
Ana
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i saw that but hey my english is also not well but they understand me here so don´t be shy to post here;)
just try out;)
you´re welcome;)
Listen to the lady, she knows what she's talking about! Another good poem, Ana Banana!!!! (I called you Ana Banana because it rhymes ).
I saw when you posted "Latin Given Vent," and now this. I will have to go see what other jems you have posted.
keep it up
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
After you die...you know how to LIVE!