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Your Waves

BetterRadioBetterRadio Posts: 189
edited July 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Sometimes when I purge my thoughts
I See myself erasing news
And then I'll spin my head
Until I find the cure

The colors of another place
Stack and build like giant waves
Of grey ideas and devistate
The shores within my head

Oh Im breaking
Oh Im feeling like taking another way
Part the sea and let me go.

See myself in open fields
With rain and blood and clouds and tears
You're still there and I see you walk
But how do I know if youre walking alone?

Why cant I see beyond the grey
And fill the void you left with waves?
They spill like time, erase my name
But the news of yours is the one I cant forget.

Oh Im breaking
Oh Im feeling like taking another way
Part the sea and let me go.
They're gonna tell you where to walk
When to smile and just what to say
They say have your own fun...

Need vinyl, doggs.
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  • Pearl_Jam_NecklacePearl_Jam_Necklace Posts: 501
    wow !!!!!!!!! did you write that ,dude? thats even more beautiful than Blame it on you. you have talent,are you in a band or anything? ive been on and off again on the pj board,sorry if ive failed to notice or missed that you were,love this one very much !!!!!!!
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • BetterRadioBetterRadio Posts: 189
    Pearl_Jam_Necklace wrote:
    wow !!!!!!!!! did you write that ,dude? thats even more beautiful than Blame it on you. you have talent,are you in a band or anything? ive been on and off again on the pj board,sorry if ive failed to notice or missed that you were,love this one very much !!!!!!!


    haha yea my dad asks if i really wrote alot of the stuff i write, espescially for school but yea i did. back about 3 weeks ago it was around two a.m. and the same situation, this goddamn girl lol. i have this thing i went through where i thought she was ignoring me. it was kind of like that. it was so cool i turned the light on and just poured it out like a cup. i really like this one too. i was in a band for a while, ive started up again. ive been writing for a while but havent posted on this board hardly ever.
    They're gonna tell you where to walk
    When to smile and just what to say
    They say have your own fun...

    Need vinyl, doggs.
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    very nice!
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • BetterRadioBetterRadio Posts: 189
    Holey Ghost wrote:
    very nice!

    Thank you.
    They're gonna tell you where to walk
    When to smile and just what to say
    They say have your own fun...

    Need vinyl, doggs.
  • likepilateihaveadoglikepilateihaveadog Posts: 1,083
    BetterRadio wrote:
    i have this thing i went through where i thought she was ignoring me. quote]


    hahahahahaha


    :D
    Teamwork. Rawk. Pwnage. Infinite Possibilities. YIELD. Hells yeah.
  • BetterRadioBetterRadio Posts: 189
    likepilateihaveadog wrote:
    BetterRadio wrote:
    i have this thing i went through where i thought she was ignoring me. quote]


    hahahahahaha


    :D

    I just realized that now hahahahaha....im also saying "I understand." like Ed does after the ebow thing alot too.
    They're gonna tell you where to walk
    When to smile and just what to say
    They say have your own fun...

    Need vinyl, doggs.
  • likepilateihaveadoglikepilateihaveadog Posts: 1,083
    BetterRadio wrote:
    likepilateihaveadog wrote:

    I just realized that now hahahahaha....im also saying "I understand." like Ed does after the ebow thing alot too.
    It's for the better.

    :D


    Good one, btw.
    Teamwork. Rawk. Pwnage. Infinite Possibilities. YIELD. Hells yeah.
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