I'll try living in this

BetterRadioBetterRadio Posts: 189
edited January 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'll try living in this
I cant take on the sky
More pain than the earth
But less than in your lies

You cant see truth clearly
I cant see for the time
Oh I asked for so little
But you took it over the line

Hang me up and take me down
This noose gets easier everytime
Your beauty entices the drowned
To fall within the lines

Leave me take me
Leave me fake me
Leave me break me
End my time
They're gonna tell you where to walk
When to smile and just what to say
They say have your own fun...

Need vinyl, doggs.
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  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    Well, hot-diggity
    I like your style

    And also, for your age, you write very beautiful lines.
    Subtle yet heartfelt.
    you managed to touch me

    hahaha, for your age, I must sound like I'm a dinosaur, but I'm only 2 yrs older

    seriously, I'd love to read more and more and more
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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