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Look At Me

coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I’ve finally broken through
Away from your noose
Once too tight
It’s my time to choose

Good evening
Can you see me now?
The light’s no longer yours
It’s my turn to bow

I’m opening up
Being released for all to see
You’ve had your moment
FUCKING LOOK AT ME

I hate that you inspire
That you always dispense
My heart needs to take
I can’t stand on the fence

My direction is clear
Leave far from here
Good night my dear
I’ll leave you with a tear

I’m opening up
Being released for all to see
You’ve had your moment
FUCKING LOOK AT ME
Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
Leaving is for the answering machine.
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Comments

  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    yeah i'm fucking looking at you. :)
    that was nice chris.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Yeeeah, coach!!! This one sure grabs ya by the chin and says, "FUCKING LOOK AT ME!!!!!!" :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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