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Angel Eyes

coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I’m so very lost
Here waiting for you
This isn’t strange or beautiful
Why don’t dreams ever come true?

Raspy voices reassuring
Angel eyes here to guide
What did I do?
I never hide

All in front
Of this faceless crowd
All in front
Of these faceless whispers
All in front
Of you and only you
Will I display

So tonight I lie
Dreaming of birds of prey
To come and take
Wisk me away

What did I do?
I never hide
Raspy voices reassure me
Angel eyes are on their way to guide

All in front
Of this faceless crowd
All in front
Of these faceless whispers
All in front
Of you and only you
Will I display
Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
Leaving is for the answering machine.
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Comments

  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I like the repetition of:

    "All in front
    Of this faceless crowd
    All in front
    Of these faceless whispers
    All in front
    Of you and only you
    Will I display"


    Very nice! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    Absolutely Beautiful Poem!
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • Brisk.Brisk. Posts: 11,561
    I like the jerry cantrell song too!

    nice work
  • coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    Thank you so much for the nice replies. :)
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I too enjoyed this one.
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