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coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Snowflakes on the horizon
Pale blue moon
It's the day after
And it's gone too soon

The morning has come
Along with it pain
Troubled with my thoughts
I'm going insane

I was born for you
But I've died instead
I close my eyes
Blood covered bed
Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
Leaving is for the answering machine.
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  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    oh wow.
    this one's really powerful!
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Yes I agree, it is powerful. It was short and brought strong emotion. Good read.
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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