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Untitled Poem: By Elle

elephantrunkelephantrunk Posts: 24
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Lost inside this train of thought. Thought it was complete. It's not. Nothing fits. You know it. Feel it. See it. Ignore it. You know what it was. Feel what it is. Hate what it's done. I feel it more then you. Things I can't forget. Love. Hate. Instead of great fate. It was more Fatal instead.
I only wanted to be somebody. So fucking bad I came unglued.
Here we are now face to face and I'm fucking you.
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  • fletchfletch Posts: 57
    elephantrunk wrote:
    Lost inside this train of thought. Thought it was complete. It's not. Nothing fits. You know it. Feel it. See it. Ignore it. You know what it was. Feel what it is. Hate what it's done. I feel it more then you. Things I can't forget. Love. Hate. Instead of great fate. It was more Fatal instead.
    very intriguing............
    One of these days I'm gonna get organizized.

    You spend your life waiting for a moment that just don't come
    Well don't waste your time waiting
  • elephantrunkelephantrunk Posts: 24
    waysideledder wrote:
    very intriguing............

    I will take that as a compliment thank you. :)

    You always have good things to say about my poems Wayside. You are a sweetheart.
    I only wanted to be somebody. So fucking bad I came unglued.
    Here we are now face to face and I'm fucking you.
  • tekno_junkietekno_junkie Posts: 87
    Nice Poem... This is like the work I would do. I love writing ;)
    Nobody sits like this rock sits. You rock, rock. The rock just sits and is. You show us how to just sit here and that's what we need.
  • fletchfletch Posts: 57
    tekno_junkie wrote:
    Nice Poem... This is like the work I would do. I love writing ;)
    Why don't write something then? Good to see you are back! ;)
    One of these days I'm gonna get organizized.

    You spend your life waiting for a moment that just don't come
    Well don't waste your time waiting
  • tekno_junkietekno_junkie Posts: 87
    waysideledder wrote:
    Why don't write something then? Good to see you are back! ;)

    Thanks sugah... and because I have writers block right now... it is killing me.
    Nobody sits like this rock sits. You rock, rock. The rock just sits and is. You show us how to just sit here and that's what we need.
  • Floyd ManzeraFloyd Manzera Posts: 82
    excellent prose tekno_.

    have you checked out Bucket Steak yet? it is invigorating. except for what ISN posted. she doesn't know anything about poetry.
    Vice President of the Synchronicity Club.
  • tekno_junkietekno_junkie Posts: 87
    Floyd Manzera wrote:
    excellent prose tekno_.

    have you checked out Bucket Steak yet? it is invigorating. except for what ISN posted. she doesn't know anything about poetry.

    Bucket Steak brought a tear to my eye. Your poetry was lovely... sorry I was not able to post about it... but you know the issue... I want to hear more from you Floyd... I think you have a talent.
    Nobody sits like this rock sits. You rock, rock. The rock just sits and is. You show us how to just sit here and that's what we need.
  • moloko21moloko21 Posts: 114
    nice poems. i mean, nice poem. hubba hubba.
    "no, i can't give you full credit, but i'm not gonna flunk you either. you're all getting incompletes."
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