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2 word post community poem

KingVKingV Posts: 10
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Heres the idea - I start with 2 words, next person copies mine, adds 2 of their own and we go.






Breath alone

(don't forget to cut and paste mine or those before you)
Barrie Ont 1998
"A fuckin' football" EV

Halifax NS 2005
"Fetch me a new guitar, I sha'n't be playing this one" EV
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  • fletchfletch Posts: 57
    in pajamas
    One of these days I'm gonna get organizized.

    You spend your life waiting for a moment that just don't come
    Well don't waste your time waiting
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    breath alone,
    in pajamas,
    me boxers
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • fletchfletch Posts: 57
    olderman wrote:
    breath alone,
    in pajamas,
    me boxers

    breath alone,
    in pajamas,
    me boxers
    are reassuring
    One of these days I'm gonna get organizized.

    You spend your life waiting for a moment that just don't come
    Well don't waste your time waiting
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    breath alone,
    in pajamas,
    me boxers
    are reassuring

    sleep alone
  • fletchfletch Posts: 57
    pacifier wrote:
    breath alone,
    in pajamas,
    me boxers
    are reassuring

    sleep alone
    breath alone,
    in pajamas,
    me boxers
    are reassuring

    sleep alone
    reordered hypothesis
    One of these days I'm gonna get organizized.

    You spend your life waiting for a moment that just don't come
    Well don't waste your time waiting
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    hippo blue
  • fletchfletch Posts: 57
    breath alone,
    in pajamas,
    me boxers
    are reassuring

    sleep alone
    reordered hypothesis
    hippo blue
    ignorant demise
    One of these days I'm gonna get organizized.

    You spend your life waiting for a moment that just don't come
    Well don't waste your time waiting
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    Hmmm, this is really making no sense to me, so I'll just follow the only pattern I can see.............


    breath alone,
    in pajamas,
    me boxers
    are reassuring

    sleep alone
    reordered hypothesis
    hippo blue
    ignorant demise

    wake alone
  • NothinGBetteRPJMaNNothinGBetteRPJMaN Posts: 530
    breath alone,
    in pajamas,
    me boxers
    are reassuring

    sleep alone
    reordered hypothesis
    hippo blue
    ignorant demise

    wake alone
    so cold
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    Member # 0004

    Rather than being birthed like a normal child, Chuck Norris instead
    decided to punch his way out of his mother's womb. Shortly thereafter
    he grew a beard.
  • Your_endorphin_rushYour_endorphin_rush Posts: 69
    breath alone,
    in pajamas,
    me boxers
    are reassuring

    sleep alone
    reordered hypothesis
    hippo blue
    ignorant demise

    wake alone
    so cold
    nipples could
    cut glass
    This is the best I could come up with.
  • fletchfletch Posts: 57
    Your_endorphin_rush wrote:
    breath alone,
    in pajamas,
    me boxers
    are reassuring

    sleep alone
    reordered hypothesis
    hippo blue
    ignorant demise

    wake alone
    so cold
    nipples could
    cut glass
    breath alone,
    in pajamas,
    me boxers
    are reassuring

    sleep alone
    reordered hypothesis
    hippo blue
    ignorant demise

    wake alone
    so cold
    nipples could
    cut glass

    lemonade pursuit
    One of these days I'm gonna get organizized.

    You spend your life waiting for a moment that just don't come
    Well don't waste your time waiting
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