clarity

mookie blaylock 10mookie blaylock 10 Posts: 4,042
five trees in a forest
do that make it so?
four walls in a room
so seemingly grow

feel the darkness

trapped in the soul
despair and rage
it dwells, so it swells
with eyes open, i still

see the darkness

ocean breeze
cascades through the window
like a fog, heavy red
in a peace that existed

smell the air in the darkness

searching, seeking answers
in pills quelling pain
the questions are more
when blood is the rain

taste it bitter, taste it sweet

with a brush, without paint
a dream becomes small
and pen robbed of ink, means
a flower wilts in the fall

hear the silence
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  • awesome, awesome, awesome,
    thanks.
    Teamwork. Rawk. Pwnage. Infinite Possibilities. YIELD. Hells yeah.
  • no, thank you, likepilateihaveadog :)
  • civ_eng_girlciv_eng_girl Posts: 2,001
    i read this one on your myspace this morning....
    it's sadder than your other poems....

    a strange juxtaposition to this beautifully sunny day....

    great work - keep it up!
    xo
    ~~*~~ ...i surfaced and all of my being was enlightend... ~~*~~
  • i read this one on your myspace this morning....
    it's sadder than your other poems....

    a strange juxtaposition to this beautifully sunny day....

    great work - keep it up!
    xo

    they shouldn't all be smiles and sunshine ceg ;):D
  • civ_eng_girlciv_eng_girl Posts: 2,001
    they shouldn't all be smiles and sunshine ceg ;):D

    awww... turn that frown upside down, Mooks!! ;):p
    ~~*~~ ...i surfaced and all of my being was enlightend... ~~*~~
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    nice,Mookie.:)
    Very visual artist-like...

    I love it....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I found this very interestin

    thaks for sharing
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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