lyrics i wrote
MeGaJuNkIe^
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i'll just put one verse in, i dunno if it's good or not just a song i'm fuckin around with
life is cold
and so am i
i can't escape with you on my mind
in this trap i sit and wait
with hate so cold my body shakes
you don't know what it's like to be me
i fight just for you to see me
it really suit the guitar i put to it
life is cold
and so am i
i can't escape with you on my mind
in this trap i sit and wait
with hate so cold my body shakes
you don't know what it's like to be me
i fight just for you to see me
it really suit the guitar i put to it
...And Leave You Be If You Cross Me And Shake Your Hand Like A Man Not A God!!!
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are my lyrics that bad that i can't even get some constructive criticism?...And Leave You Be If You Cross Me And Shake Your Hand Like A Man Not A God!!!0
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