"Beaten"-I dunno' why I posted it.
thunder_balls
Posts: 117
Well..I wrote this in about 3 minutes, since I just felt like writing it for some reason. And now I have the urge to post it..so I'm gonna' put it here to get it out of my mind. It's also, not finished, nor edited..here goes:
"Beaten"
Mommy can't you see
daddy don't believe me
i'm not high enough
to be too low
I'm too slow
to win an untimed race
and the lower i get
the faster the pace
Pick me up and put me down
ignore every muscle frown
when things collide to hard
they shatter into many shards
that are white,and tight, sharp
but they're really only picks for a harp
it's too tuned out, so you better twist it in
apparently enough, your fists are workin'
"Beaten"
Mommy can't you see
daddy don't believe me
i'm not high enough
to be too low
I'm too slow
to win an untimed race
and the lower i get
the faster the pace
Pick me up and put me down
ignore every muscle frown
when things collide to hard
they shatter into many shards
that are white,and tight, sharp
but they're really only picks for a harp
it's too tuned out, so you better twist it in
apparently enough, your fists are workin'
7/10/06
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