Deeper Thinking
thunder_balls
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. I'm sorry..I just had to let that out. Erm, anyways.
Deeper Thinking:
sitting in my chair
there goes a strand of hair
won't look anywhere
because i will only see myself
i can't put down my shoulders
they just cannot be lowered
i just can't, without power..
and i see you
and i want, anything else
revive me please
or take me out of misery
im on my knees
and this feeling won't go, away..
and then it hits me
i am nothing
you are nothing
i wish
i feel something
it's always bumping
to get out of me
and into you
it's too impossible,
to pick up what has been downed.
but that sound,
the sound that i can only see,
makes it,
makes it, for me.
pay no attention to this
pay no attention to it at all
why are you looking?
what do you see?
is it you or me?
this can't be..
i've got your attention
only out of a reflection
think you.
what feeling is it saying?
when the skys aren't so blue
and neither are your veins.
Yeah..just got done writing that. Hmm. Even I don't understand it...
Deeper Thinking:
sitting in my chair
there goes a strand of hair
won't look anywhere
because i will only see myself
i can't put down my shoulders
they just cannot be lowered
i just can't, without power..
and i see you
and i want, anything else
revive me please
or take me out of misery
im on my knees
and this feeling won't go, away..
and then it hits me
i am nothing
you are nothing
i wish
i feel something
it's always bumping
to get out of me
and into you
it's too impossible,
to pick up what has been downed.
but that sound,
the sound that i can only see,
makes it,
makes it, for me.
pay no attention to this
pay no attention to it at all
why are you looking?
what do you see?
is it you or me?
this can't be..
i've got your attention
only out of a reflection
think you.
what feeling is it saying?
when the skys aren't so blue
and neither are your veins.
Yeah..just got done writing that. Hmm. Even I don't understand it...
7/10/06
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"I've got your attention
only out of a reflection"
It was an interesting one.
(and the the rhymes aren't cliche'd,
and there appears to be much thought with regard to word economy)
i like it, a lot
we are nothing, to be sure
isn, i think i love him too... s'pecially with a name like thunderballs