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Pearl Jam poem

fiftybabyfiftybaby Posts: 5
edited September 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I have placed the following Pearl Jam titles in to a sort of poem.
Music does sensational things, and each title has several meanings to me.
A weakness, strength, fear, smile, tear, rage, possibility, regret, need, dream, wish, loss, gain, girl, etc.

On June 3/06 this is how I felt.

"Once Alone I Am Mine You Are Alive Given To Fly.
In Hiding Jeremy Blood World Wide Suicide Animal Dissident Black.
Breath Save You Immortality Do The Evolution.
Hail Hail Nothing As It Seems I Got Id.
Brother Betterman Wishlist Nothingman Who Are You.
Daughter State Of Love And Trust Of The Girl Faithful.

Push Me Pull Me Vs. Grievance Not For You.
Crazy Mary Last Kiss Insignificance.
Evacuation Thumbing My Way Off He Goes Around The Bend....
RVM Come Back."
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  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    Thats crazy, but cool.:)
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • miskinmiskin Posts: 278
    the first few words make sense together.

    after that, its just a list of titles to me im afraid...
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  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    kind of interesting.
    why don't you post one as of today?
    Would be interested to see the difference. :)
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    miskin wrote:
    the first few words make sense together.

    after that, its just a list of titles to me im afraid...


    it's not just you.
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  • fiftybabyfiftybaby Posts: 5
    Eh.
    I invite all comments, but lets try to keep it positive, enough of that other stuff out there. The thing with personal thoughts and poetry is that; it's a personal thing, so I don't expect everyone to make a connection.
    It may not add up for those who simply just read it. You have to put some thought into it. Well you don't have to, but if you want to try and understand someone else's POV, then it would require some thought process and some sort of reflection. Thanks for those who take the time to read it. And I like the thought of writing one for today and see how it differs. I definitely will update it at one point. Thanks.
    To those doing the Aussie shows, enjoy.
    Hope to share some good vibes along this tour.

    50.
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  • dissidentbehindthecdissidentbehindthec Posts: 100
    Weird I kinda did an art thing like this...like..a collage with all the album/song titles arranged 'artistically' (asthetically) on a page that actually started out as a sheet of paper that a marker exploded onto.

    If I ever get a scanner working I'll link to it, I think it's pretty neat, it's been hanging on my wall for years and I get quite a few compliments, oddly enough, considering I mostly did it for my own personal enjoyment.
    Speaking as a child of the 90's....I never thought you'd habit.

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    http://www.last.fm/user/evolutionbaby/
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