About Colliding Suns

JRoberto
JRoberto Posts: 24
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
About Colliding Suns
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I let it lay on me,
the scent of your grace,
and my mind wanders,
through the streets of your lightness,
my eyes colored with a feverish desire,
our mouths lost in a solitude full of lazyness.

Yes, lead me,
take me away,
I'll follow your steps into this temple,
where we are one,
and then, when we feel our skin kissed by heaven's angels,
we will rest under a yellow cloud,
with a purple heart tattoed on our souls.

Read,
bled,
and reshaped by your glory, I fall asleep,

in my dreams, we are similing,
and singing to ourselves,

secret mantras about colliding suns.

Julian R. Knihs ®
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  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :) *sigh* Such beautiful dreams are these! You write so eloquently, Mister Knihs.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    Very nice.
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,389
    our mouths lost in a solitude full of lazyness.

    I like this line. Nice, sultry poem.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • JRoberto
    JRoberto Posts: 24
    Thanks for nice words you all :)

    JRoberto
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    wow, nice poem. Hope you post more often.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    very very lovely...

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