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If Only...

trinityelizatrinityeliza Posts: 426
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I looked up
to find
A double rainbow
felt like a halo
One I couldn't hold
Inside
that second
I believed
I am
charmed
If only
I could
become
one...
the beauty
the energy
the glow
If only
we could
find a way
to
never
fade away......
Put me in coach...I'm ready to
Fuck up...the USA...
Look at me...I can rig...
The presidency!!!!
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  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    :) I like this a lot
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    i like this a lot too
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Nice one. I love double rainbows.
  • trinityelizatrinityeliza Posts: 426
    Me too!!! That day was especially intense & beautiful.... It happened at one of those moments that change your life forever. It was breathtaking, really it was.
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • studio54ravemanstudio54raveman Posts: 72
    BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN I wish dreams that like nevergo away
    BOW-WOW-WOW-YIPPIE YO YIPPIE YA
    BOW WOW WOW YIPPIE YO
    It's kinda hard in the L.B.C.
    When you're the SNOOP DO-GG!!!

    ME SAY"SHUGGY FO SHUGGY MY NOOGIE!!!!"-URBAN BOOGIE

    "REMEMBER KIDS LIVING IN TOTALITARIAN COMMUNES BREEDS DISSIDENCE"- POOPY BOOGIE'S TINKY
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Double rainbows are gorgeous and so is your poem. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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