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trinityeliza

On tear stained pages~In the shadows of distance
I launch into a somber soliloquy....
Breaking beyond the grasp of reason
On another sedative
In search of tranquility

Giving in... It rushes out...
Words spill till the blood runs dry,...
Directed at you with no one in mind
Sent of to ya and I don't know why?

Ashamed now that I lost my grip
Amidst the pain & confusion
In those moments you were my best friend
~A comforting delusion~

If I say to you I'm sorry
Would it matter anyway?
I I say I never meant to hurt you
Would you still blame me today?
I could say to you
I LOVE YOU
You're too cynical to understand
So,... from now on I'll keep you hidden here
Lost at my command

On a mission of survival
In the desert of despair
I'm not proud of what I had to do...
Suffering you believe I deserve

Sometimes I agree with you

But you never seen it all
You knew nothing at all
One brief moment
You'll see inside of me
The day your grudge will fade
Will you then stop taunting me??
See I've already paid.....

If I say to you I'm sorry
Would it matter anyway?
I I say I never meant to hurt you
Would you still blame me today?
i could say to you
I LOVE YOU
You're too cynical to understand
So,... from now on I'll keep you hidden here
Lost at my command

violet ray

Ashamed now that I lost my grip
Amidst the pain & confusion
In those moments you were my best friend
~A comforting delusion~



i think you are in my head...

twin2

This one is sad, but I like it too.

trinityeliza

Thanks for the kind words. I don't mind the "critique"... I like to receive IM/Private Messages when someone has something lengthy to say. I love discussing the dynamics, emotions, song progressions, etc... feel free to send private notes

studio54raveman

You must have been hurt very seriously by someone you gave all your heart to.It sucks feeling that way or being used in similiar ways but you are an amazing writer!!!

trinityeliza

studio54raveman wrote:

You must have been hurt very seriously by someone you gave all your heart to.It sucks feeling that way or being used in similiar ways but you are an amazing writer!!!

You hit that one right on the head smarty pants ;P

ISN

On tear stained pages~In the shadows of distance
I launch into a somber soliloquy....
Breaking beyond the grasp of reason
On another sedative
In search of tranquility

Giving in... It rushes out...
Words spill till the blood runs dry,...
Directed at you with no one in mind
Sent of to ya and I don't know why?

Ashamed now that I lost my grip
Amidst the pain & confusion
In those moments you were my best friend
~A comforting delusion~

If I say to you I'm sorry
Would it matter anyway?
I I say I never meant to hurt you
Would you still blame me today?
I could say to you
I LOVE YOU
You're too cynical to understand
So,... from now on I'll keep you hidden here
Lost at my command

On a mission of survival
In the desert of despair
I'm not proud of what I had to do...
Suffering you believe I deserve

Sometimes I agree with you

But you never seen it all
You knew nothing at all
One brief moment
You'll see inside of me
The day your grudge will fade
Will you then stop taunting me??
See I've already paid.....

If I say to you I'm sorry
Would it matter anyway?
I I say I never meant to hurt you
Would you still blame me today?
i could say to you
I LOVE YOU
You're too cynical to understand
So,... from now on I'll keep you hidden here
Lost at my command

it's such a good description of a complex relationship......I can identify with it.....it sounds like my life......I love when that happens......I get all paranoid......but paranoia brings adrenalin......thanks for the rush....:)

Being Enlightened

Great work, trinityeliza! I've read a few of your offereings and I like your style.