Heaven's Fire

trinityeliza

An angel tantalizes me with heaven's fire,

To covet a life just beyond my grasp.

Years paint the path of forbidden desire,

As his wings burn my skin.

Woe to you, forbidden Angel,

Oh blissful agony drown my cries,

Expose my souls ravenous despair,

Gratify me with your wings afire.

trinityeliza

anyone care to take a shot at interpretation on this piece.... i think my lovely may have taken this the wrong way??? 'tis it not beautifully written???

velvet I site

trinityeliza wrote:

anyone care to take a shot at interpretation on this piece.... i think my lovely may have taken this the wrong way??? 'tis it not beautifully written???

you crave a master to paint you into the fabric of immortality?

or a lover to uplift you into the stars of bliss?

you're too complex for definitive interpretation darling, so you may want to avoid egging people into it [certain death],... but yes, it is quite beautifully composed, both in style and substance--nearing greatness are we?

trinityeliza

nearing something!!

velvet I site

trinityeliza wrote:

nearing something!!

http://freespace.virgin.net/pete.shelley/wciti.htm

Dreams of Red

trinityeliza wrote:

nearing something!!

the way you tease is more exciting than anything else i can imagine...

i just wish you would give me the chance to explain myself.

trinityeliza

i always do,....