Dancing in Ectasy

trinityelizatrinityeliza Posts: 426
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
My bed is lonely, and so cold too
As I lay here alone and dream of you
Ooh, how I want you desperately
To have you here in bed with me
To feel your body cover mine
Our passion raw and unconfined
Your manhood stiff as I pull you near
Whispering my needs into your ear
As I feel you enter me deep within
Ooh, the pleasure your love instills
As my body trembles with throbbing thrills
Ooh, My Love! Deeper! I beg...
Surrounding your waist with the length of my legs
My mouth at your throat, my teeth lightly graze
As you're giving me all that my hunger craves
Moving as one, like the waves of the ocean
Thrusting and grinding in continuous motions
Your name on my lips time and again
Hugging you you tightly so deep within
The sound of your breathing heavy and hard
As urgency carries us overboard
Wrapped around you, as over we roll
My hands holding yours as I take control
My body with yours so perfectly tuned
Moaning with pleasure, like wolves to the moon
Slow and steady in a tormenting pace
As my heart, and yours, continue to race
Ooh, God, My Love! The time is soon!
Come follow me, soar to the moon
Arching against you in ecstasy's name
As passion takes love to whole new plane
My body with yours, melting like butter
As we collide together with a climatic shudder
I look in your eyes, so full of love
And know exactly what you're thinking of!
With a devilish gleam, I kiss your lips
As you harden beneath my fingertips
Ooh, the night is young, and full of romance
As we enter once more into ecstasy's dance
Put me in coach...I'm ready to
Fuck up...the USA...
Look at me...I can rig...
The presidency!!!!
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Comments

  • i just got shivers and chills reading my own post,... love those moments when time stops and it's just 2 becoming one,... bee-you-tea-full :D
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • i just got shivers and chills reading my own post,... love those moments when time stops and it's just 2 becoming one,... bee-you-tea-full :D


    this is one of the most sintilating [sp?], erotic, and beautifull pieces of writing i have ever read,... i couldn't respond when i first saw it because i was shaken into jello.
    i'm a thief... and a liar...

    see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
  • shaken, not stirred :) ??? j/k,.... since when do u become tongue tied?
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • electronblueelectronblue WPB Florida Posts: 3,460
    your poetry is beautiful with so much imagery. i think i am tongue tied...~



    :)
    ********************************
    "Forgive every being,
    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


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